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Insatiate - (Spin on BMW's Satiate)
sups,
the following lines too...just what i feel... You've kinda taken it to the next step hai na... or maybe not next but a parallel space...
Your fingers silencing my trembling lips
The constant rush to preoccupy;
My mind with the hunger that promises to outlive
And stick to me like a second skin
You’re bottomless in the emptiness of me
Hold me, touch me, but never set me free
In every fibre of my being,
Please reverberate
Insatiate
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Knock Knock
Req,
what ever I do I won't open that door tonight...
LOL this wasn't visually sacry...but it was kinda nerves stretched...the unknown...the fear...just the fear, without reasons is scary in itself...
:-)))
bmw.
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Insatiate - (Spin on BMW's Satiate)
Supriya,
yes exactly... This says it all I think, I understand where you speak from and what you try to say... and your words like always are so very beautiful... :-)))) You never do reach the level of satiate do you...theres still more and you want more...there's no end to more...just like theres no end to love...
Please fill up all the gaps and spaces
And color me red in all the blank places
And fill me with the sense of pride
And tell me how I just can’t hide
Bewitched in skin, and bothered in the mind
Rattle me, shake me, take away all peace
In abandon, incomplete
Don’t risk the part when I comfortably breathe
Leave me inconsolable, in defeat
In every fibre of my being
Reverberate
Insatiate
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SALVATION (inspired by BMW, Bunty, and Meera San)
Lol Anne,
When I wrote satiate... I never dreamed I'd inspire... I have never ever looked at my writings as inspirational... just thoughts out of my mind...mostly raw and well honest.
You have written a really great one...salvation...it is sometimes when you live too much in pretenses...an honest moment is salvation.
bmw.
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Visiting Family!
usha,kalyanee,L rao,achi,Elementa,santosh, Enigma, D sampath, Sue.
Thanks for your comments and yeah missing me a little. Am sorry for the late reply and a combined reply...It's just that this is easier...
You guys make me feel nice.
bmw.
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The wanderer and the master.
Hey aditi,
Thats okay, better late than never! Now that excuses my reply to your comment. LOL
I know all about sons..have one of my own LOL...I can just imagine. lucky they didn't really look any more within.
bmw.
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A miracle FOR Tinkerbell.
Meera,
Glad you love it. :-))))
Punch line punches does it!!! Good...
U made my day by that comment.
me.
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ME on the Little Stars
mrs muffet,
exactly!
...they say that brilliance takes care of itself...it's the mediocre that needs to be taken care of.
And A child should never ever have to face this feeling of not quite being good enough...there's always time isn't there , always places where they can just be...without pressures...
nice one.
me.
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