Both of us standing here,
Staring silently at each other,
So near, yet so far...
With no barriers between us,
Except our egos at war.
Say something,
Don’t stop, it’s just pain in my eyes,
Stubborn cold fury in yours
Hope dies in such cold.
Slowly…of hypothermia,
Numbs, sleeps, and never wakes up.
See this cold is killing me deep inside,
Whose is the right side?
When love gets set aside?
You are it for me,
Love still beats,
Like a wounded bird,
Helplessly in my heart,
Ego is what keeps us apart…
Passionate anger
Fire I can burn in…
I can accept…
But this cold,
I feel old,
Crushed beneath an avalanche,
After all the things we said,
Hope lies here,
Bled, dead.
Both of us standing here,
Staring silently at each other,
So near, yet so far...
With no barriers between us,
Except our egos at war.
bmw.
After reading supriya's Days are numbered these words appeared in my head, I had to pen down ...I like my head uncluttered...
Close
kelda,
you read several of my posts? lol just for that alone hugz.
whimsical humour...:-))) Not many people notice...
thanks,
me.
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thanks :-)
dennis.
me.
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Lol bhavna...
necessity is tha mother laziness tha father...fits nicely :-)))
lol.
rubbish is cool, It's all i understand...
bmw.
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ew,
yes it is isn't it? ice ice baby...loved that.
me.
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I really enjoyed reading several of your posts, you write with such fluidity and a bit of whimsical humour.
Thank you
Kelda
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nice poem BMW
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hmmmm.. i liked u went on to explain the shortcut hehehehe... honestly i had guessed it.. (not that didnt like the explanation,, :)))
goshhhhh...all these yrss i used to think that necessity is the mother of invention... nvr knew laziness adds altogether a different angle to it... or mayb is d father heheheheheeh... :))))) Necessity & Laziness..wow make a nice couple,, don't they??? nt bad i finally know it todayyyy...
nvr mind jst talkin rubbish.. :))))
rgds
Bhavna
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LOVELy....egos at war.....just that and nothing else...yet its so ice ice baby....not even flames can thaw ...
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LOL vish,
Us bmw's got instincts...
Awww a redeeming quality! wonderful.
Wonly you do not fool moi...
You flirted with me cause u know am happily married helplessly and completely in love with my bigger n probably better half...n flirting with me was...well safe??
It wasn't really...but thats what you thought!!lol...
And well LOL I don't call D sampath SIR either...so umm no sir!!! Uncle if you want!
N well you win some you lose some...LOL...
betta luck for tha next one...
Friendz?
bmw.
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BMW,
I didnt realise u were such a kid, these 28 year olds were your contemporaries? You sounded mature, so I flirted... now start calling me Sir, like everyone calls Sampath..he doesnt know it, but I am his contemporary..same batch, another school..
Complements for your maturity and depth though.. and very sorry to lose a flirtable..but I dont cradle snatch...
cheers
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