You know...I think I might be going insane...
love haunts me to the point of pain...
I know he loves me,
our love a slice of divine,
...and yet I pine...
for just one touch,
one chance to inhale him,
fill me with him within...
... and yet I pine...
I hold him in my heart,
a constant ache,
and I pine,
to hold him next to my heart,
entwine...
lie together thus,
for all eternity.
Him and Me,
I am going insane,
I love him to the point of pain.
Love that fills me with pleasure,
Takes me high,
how high,no measure,
Fills me with joy,
brimfull,
A love that raises me,
thrills continuously,
so much so that I go insane,
almost like to the point of pain.
Pleasure and pain,
two shades ,
merged,
one.
colour me,
in the insane colour of love...
colour me I say,
in the insane colour of love,
Won't you colour with me today ?
Bmw
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Buntys banter,
Thanks, Inmtense yes. and almost all things are self inflicted...u allow...or dis allow.
take care,
me.
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Dsampath,
Yes Iam lucky, but perhaps it is because I feel intensely. NO half measures, no keep my heart safe. Straight Jumps...and high flights...Why worry of pain...its another kind of pleasure.
me.
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Kunjubi,
Thanks. The flame of love in my heart...eternally. :))))
glad you liked it.
me.
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Hiya BMW,
Nicely written. Very intense...almost self inflicting!
Bunty.
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writer at heart,
thanks:))
me.
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there is perhaps no such thing as insanity.. there are only alternate realities.. some who get stuck in one of their realities not matching up with others is called insane..so no way you can go insane...... but you are lucky to have the bliss of this reality.....
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Bravo! That's LOVE, incarnated...Blackie! in a splendid way. The true feelings are exposed That gives an impetus to all those who are in love.. Congratulations.. Keep it up. Keep the flame of love always in yr heart. Cheers kunjubi
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Amazing stuff.Enjoyed it.
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downto earth,
yeah a twilight zone was i think right...thats where i was...I'm out now...
bmw.
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hi BMW,
. feels like you are in twilight zone
that was a phantastic way to use the words together.... yep the pain and pleasure merge in the potion of love
it is beautiful poem
regards
dte
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